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Once I walked a crooked line,
down the narrow path of hate.
That lead me to contempt and sorrow,
which surely confirmed my fate.
A turning point was not for me;
At unease about everything.
I watch the people, how they corrupt
what once was a beautiful thing.
The ways of the mind, and human heart
shall forever be concealed
until they who hurt can realize
that what they do is real.

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When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.


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