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Make the light shine,in the dark.
Move me softly, shadow lark.
Walk me home,then hold my hand.
Scream the whispers,hollow land.
Speak them backwards,forewards, right.
Don't care direction,day or night.
Make me all but feel brand-new.
Flip me over, pull it through.
Tie the knot that holds us tight.
Don't wanna know my wrong from right,
or have it easy, break a fight.
'Cause Im tear it over, make up new,
kiss your tears, in love with you.


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