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I never gave her more than she deserved.
Everytime that I told her I loved her I meant it.
Carefull not to spoil her.
She is a part of me, flawless even if she decides otherwise.
I promise to protect her and carry her until she can fly.
She is my flesh, she is my daughter.

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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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