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My love is pure
Untouched by the hands of man
There is nothing I wouldnt do
For my on my heart there is no ban

You are my source of joy
The lovliest; bar none
I'd never speak and evil word
For you and I are one

Together we float down this path of red
My eyes meet yours
And though no words are said

I feel your passion in my breast
A kiss upon my brow
A coupled fire that will never rest
Unto one and other our souls have led

Together forever in our shelter of love
None may enter, or break through
I'll never ask of something more
So long as I'm with you

-Raven

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Fate holds on tight
As we stumble on through life

-K.J. Hackett


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