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Time flows on
healing hurts
soothing souls
hope returns with the sun
and night can not steal it
daylight comes around
clearing fog from a troubled mind
pain brings a check
and the world returns to normal

Believe in yourself, for you are your best encouragement.

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The following comments are for "Untitled"
by silentgoodbye

In short...
The poem is a success, I must clear it out in the beginning.

The ups and downs of "troubled" journey along the experiences ultimately fade off "and the world returns to normal". In short the poem communicate a straight message.Nice.

If I put a comment (as a bad habit of a simple reader),take it as appreciation, I request. The minimalist approach of the piece eats up the gravity of the message.

Though communication is always taken to be a private chamber of the artiste; so the experimentation must follow as you represent.

Still, please look into my trifle suggestion. With great expectation of getting more good pieces from you,



( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: February 10, 2006 )

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