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The Garden Path
by brickhouse (Member) - published: February 7, 2006
Word Count: 45 Word Bytes: 353 Viewed: 290 times
Category - Poetry
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Carefully she cultivates
The Poison tree
She snips some branches
here and there
And waters it delicately
Only for the beauty
The heedless beauty
The trance of those
Thorny thorns as they bleed
Out death
Does she know
The danger there?
Does she care?



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"Be on my side, I'll be on your side. There is no reason for us to hide." --Neil Young


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The following comments are for "The Garden Path"
by brickhouse

thorns of a dilemna
I liked the spell this cast which I feel would have been far more prickly without the word repeats.

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: February 10, 2006 )

it's the repeating
Penelope,
Thanks. This one wasn't easy for me at all, and is still not in perfect form.

( Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: February 11, 2006 )





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