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Fire and starlight did not call us again
More literally, we used phones
A couple times a month or less

We met again over good music and bad coffee
It had been so long, and you looked different
But your eyes were still clear as amber

Our words did not falter though we had to yell
To make ourselves heard over the jazz trombone
You fell in love with my city (and I hoped with me)

Now I will see you soon to dance away the night
And hope that you will hold me close to your heart
God knows I'm praying for a trilogy

I've been trying to change my avatar for four years...

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The following comments are for "Romance Revisited (a sequel)"
by frenchie

I have a previous poem entitled "Fleeting Romance", in which girl met boy... Now, in this girl has found boy again, but she doesn't know what will happen. She will only write a third if there is a happy ending... She REALLY wants there to be a happy ending... ;)



( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: February 7, 2006 )

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