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i love you
with every fiber of my being
for everything you are
and everything you make me out to be
there are moments when i think of us
and how its going to be
how we\'re so right for eachother
and how you make me so damn happy

you may think you are below me
but you couldnt be more wrong
we are equal in every single way
well, all except for one

my love for you, my love, my dear
is the strongest, purest
the only one I\'ll ever feel
i need your love to get me by
i want your kisses
to get me high

your embrace is one ive only dreampt of
and one i cannot wait to call my own
its amazing how much i care
and am unafraid of the unknown

i wish for you to be by my side
now
forever
always
and until the end of time

-Raven

------
Fate holds on tight
As we stumble on through life

-K.J. Hackett


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The following comments are for "To Profess"
by xRaven91x

Hot
Hot love poems make me hot.

( Posted by: xXxTrinityxXx [Member] On: February 7, 2006 )

Thank You
Tap-

Yes. Indeed the lower case 'i's were intentional whereas the slashes appear to be a glitch of some form. -although they seem to work in my favor.

Thank you for commenting, to be honest I didn't think anyone would really pay any attention to anything other than content.

Presentation, as it always has been, is everything.

-Leigh

( Posted by: xRaven91x [Member] On: February 8, 2006 )





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