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Sometimes I may not seem too smart
But here Iíll mend your broken heart
To these hopes I shall never betray
Unto this world Iíll never stray

The numbness and excitement you decree
In just one touch, it seems to exceed
Yet my soul, you have rightly touched
I never knew I could feel so much

Please donít leave me in the dark
Here I stand offering my heart

The decision is yours to make
But please donít fear, for my hearts sake
Your absence would leave me blue
But in the end, I love you

Too strong, too fast, these words may seem
Perhaps as though you're in a dream
But to be sure I enclose a kiss
One of mine, to never miss

Collect when ready, a kiss is your fee
For you are my Kevin, and I am your Leigh


-Raven

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Fate holds on tight
As we stumble on through life

-K.J. Hackett


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