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if forever i must wait
to call you mine
make no mistake

i would stay a thousand lifetimes
if it meant that you would be mine

if ever there is another
to come along and fill you with glee
i would not hold your words against you
if it better for you to leave

i would wish you well and wave goodbye
though silently, my heart would die

but still i'd sit, only steps behind
in case you were to ever fall
for whether you believe it true
i'll be here through it all

Fate holds on tight
As we stumble on through life

-K.J. Hackett

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