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My tears scattered
on the street road
at midnight
and not yet found

even the dew spilt
on each & every grass
dried when sun emerged
but not my tears

darkness was hidden
behind the street lamp
found the weariness there
but not my tears

None of places are there
to find my lost tears
but found many places to share
and spill newly born tears


------
malyawan


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