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Stay for a while
my little butterfly

It was priceless
though you set a price

remember we bathed moonbeam
until spilt on bed

disappeared now in the dark
bride for a single night


------
malyawan


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The following comments are for "Butterfly"
by malyawan

good
i liked it simple with hidden meaning

( Posted by: Anowara [Member] On: December 28, 2012 )





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