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Life is like a flower. In a world full of weeds.
You strive to sprout and grow, yet somethings eating your leaves.
You make it to the blooming stages. "Oh joy, what a thrill."
Then you start to wilt and die, and hope that its not real.

When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.

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The following comments are for "Life Is Like A Flower"
by pinkfroggy

ha ha ha
this was delightful! an interesting perspective on the life cycle

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: February 6, 2006 )

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