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Temperamental artist am I,
and who are you to say.
That I am different,
and not like you in every little way.
To be different is good, and I am to say
if we were all alike where would this world be today.

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When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.


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by pinkfroggy

Temperamental Artist
Wow, the second poem of yours that Ive commented on. I guess i just like your style. Like I said before, straight to the point...no frills. And I like the little kick to the kid so ignorant as to see us as a seperate,unequal people.

( Posted by: plp420 [Member] On: February 5, 2006 )





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