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You handed me a flower once, I have it still today.
But like our love, just a matter of time before it wilted away.
It once was a beautiful thing, now it is ugly, dry and dead.
Just like the memory of us, that still lingers in my head.
Forever you shall be, a continuing mystery to me.
You are like clouds in the sky or sand in the sea, never in one place
will you stay, never with me.

When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.

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