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There used to be a girl, whose joy knew no bounds. She still smiles often, but inside she frowns. This mask she wears is cursed, to forever hide her sorrow. She's hurting deep inside for her theres no tomorrow.

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When you are with me, I feel Alive yet at the same time I feel Dead Inside. You give me wings so I can fly but unbound me not from these chains I am tied.


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The following comments are for "No Tomorrow"
by pinkfroggy

No Tomorrow
Its short and straight forward with a little rhyme scheme. I like it...there shouldnt be a limit or number of words required. Just say enough to get out your emotion/feeling or point and leave it open and without frills.
Nice--
Berri*

( Posted by: plp420 [Member] On: February 5, 2006 )

short and sweet
i rather liked it, she sounds like someone i dated for a while. she is still to this day, my best friend in the whole world.

( Posted by: johntellall [Member] On: February 6, 2006 )





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