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The dreamer’s been summoned
and it’s voice becomes clear,
“Child become woman.”

Look around for the dream lives while awake.
Don’t miss the glory of what is
while the what is not seems forgotten.

Wisp through life in a state of wonder
for pretending leads to unwanted caution.
Choose only your heart to obey.

Nightmares and fantasies redeem us.
Reclaim your words
and the journey continues.


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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Summoned Dreamer"
by nae411

Welcome Home Nae!!
Someone must have "summoned" you, you've been miss around here.

It was a relief for me to find this, since you were struggling, you know it always happens and we just never know when it will end and something wonderous twirls itself unto paper.

Very nice job with this one and I have to agree with Lucie, once again, I also think this is one of your best ones. Brevity, tight and very real.

Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: February 4, 2006 )

Lucie and Dareva
Lucie, thank you my friend for calling me and summoning me back. It feels so good to be here. I miss this place but it aches a little when there is nothing for me to share. Love you. Namaste.

Dar, you have insight my friend. Lucie did summon me! I am happy you have noticed my absense. Feels good knowing I have real friends here. Hugs to you!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 4, 2006 )

Nae's muse.
Hi Nae...I suspect your muse felt a little guilty bailing out on you lately, and decided to make up for it with this gem. Nicely done!

Next time you see her...ask her if she runs into mine...SEND HER HOME!

love ya,
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: February 5, 2006 )

Nae's Sassy Avatar!!
Oh, I know we are here to comment on writing, IMO photography is an art and I love your new Avatar. Promises me more poetry will be posted in the same look........sassy?!?!

Dar')

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: February 16, 2006 )

OH Dar
Funny you should mention avatars. I just pulled my husband over a little while ago to admire yours. Hugs my friend.

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 16, 2006 )

Holy Crap
I swear -- Nae's avatar changed during the time it took me to get from teh beginning to the end of her poem. That's pretty freaky.

Yeesh.

Good poem, though!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: February 16, 2006 )

Viper
I always thought you enjoyed freaky??? Thanks for stopping by.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 17, 2006 )

Summoned dreamer
Dear Nae...

Thank you so much for your warm comment on my 'Let me be a while'! By now I have been reading some of your poems and I am eager to compliment you on your talent! Your style is very good, Nae and your choice of words truly poetical. It's wonderful to 'meet' a poet like you! Wishing you the best of luck, love & light,

Tumbleweed (Rikki)

( Posted by: Tumbleweed [Member] On: February 26, 2006 )





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