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In a Kirk Cobain
kind of way
Iím feeling the mood
to write and play

Here comes another
anxiety attack
Valium is for sissies
get me some smack

Just want to sit here
typing this live long day
I donít want no distraction
no roll in the hay

Can't you see that I'm
a literary genius
another Jack Kerouac
Get your ass outta here
get off my back

In a Tony Soprano
kind of way
I'm really feeling
in the mood now
to write and play

Don't piss me off
don't give no flack
My pen is dangerous
it will get you whacked



------
"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde


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The following comments are for "Do Not Disturb"
by MountainBill

MountainBill
Hey Doc..How you doin'?..

It was Christopher's screenplay which could have gotten him clipped. Giving Tony too much lip wouldn't be wise idea either.

Take care chasing dragon..and nurses.

Enjoyed read.

Ciao,
BobbyG

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 3, 2006 )

Bill, ok fine then.
You just think youare so hot. :1 (playing) You are. Really you are.

( Posted by: Legs [Member] On: February 4, 2006 )

MountainBill, a hottie?
Well if that avatar is yours, you do have gorgeous eyes. I'm seeing something more in you as I keep reading your poetry and comments.

One intellegent man, unafraid to venture out on a pen.....write at will, will write whatever is his and make it ours.

This is one of my favorites of yours so far. The comparisons of Kirk and Tony were excellent kickers to me, IMO. I truly enjoyed this MB and read it several times.

Thank you for sharing this, looking forward to much more. As Lucie said, this IS a "rarity".

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: February 4, 2006 )

Good
A good poem. I enjoyed it...just one thing though it's Kurt Cobain not Kirk lol

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: February 5, 2006 )

thanks
thanks to windchime,bobby7l,legs,dareva and dentt- 'kurt cobain' no kirk, ya right I must of been foggy from my medication normall I write better, and I know thats not right kirk-forgive me kurt where ever you are.
took too long to give thanks due to illness. back in full swing I hope soon.

( Posted by: mountainbill [Member] On: February 26, 2006 )

Oh, Bill, it's Kurt Cobain, not Kirk....duh?
You airhead, you.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 28, 2008 )





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