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Darkness consumes the last of her
She said her final goodbye
She lets the depths swallow her
She tried so hard
Nothing was worth it
All there is now
The note she left
Telling her mother she loved her
Telling her father she hated him
Telling her friends she was sorry
Asking her boyfriend if this
Was what he wanted
He shed a tear
But moved forward
More quickly
That the man one who loved her
Who closed himself
In the shadows
For the same fate

Jennifer Lynne

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The following comments are for "Final Goodbye"
by Jenninite

Simple, effective, honest
There is no bullshit here, I admire that.

( Posted by: Gallus [Member] On: February 4, 2006 )

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