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Brevity
by verve (Member) - published: February 1, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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Overcast afternoon,
scattered flurries soon;
curious dog explores,
time strikes once more.

Beneath the willow weeping,
alive or am I sleeping;
creaking tree moans,
likewise auld bones.



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brevity
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( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: February 2, 2006 )





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