Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Slow green lights across the water And the kids at Flinders Street Station Taper jean girls and dark-hair boys. Did you choke in the casino Or is it 1933? Greasy skin and overreaching affection, Plump girl/sloped boy. I’m not Gatz and I’m not Gatsby Wide brown water I walk along And no slow light or taper jean girl. The train took her, and he lost the battle Against the city.

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