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These days

I am not good enough to smile

to talk.. or to say I am fine

However , no cure is there and if it's found ,

then it needs

a power that is tremendous and divine



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The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.


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by fairgrace

these
Fairgrace,

The consciousnesses of these thoughts in themselves are in some ways raw, but can be very self-revealing. They are all very subjective.

Good write.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: January 29, 2006 )

Brilliant
Hiba, this is brilliant!!! What a great one. Love your writing...

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: February 24, 2006 )

a while
Hiba, you haven't written in a while.....I hope all is ok.....miss seeing your name here. Also, as I was managing my writings I found you had written me some lovely comments....thank you so much for all these positive comments that make me want to write more..
Mona

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: March 29, 2006 )

These..
A great poem. Why are u not posting now ?

GSVK

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: April 8, 2006 )





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