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Space,
infinite volume
absolute vastness
no beginning, no end

elemental conception,
quantum explosions
extends, breathes,
spirals out of control

consciousness,
order out of chaos,
the universe unfolds


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it isn't wine. If you wish your heart to be bright, you must do a little work." Rumi

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