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You don't want to hear about my pain.
Who wants to see the clouds through the rain.
Nobody really wants to hear the truth.
God is good and I got proof.

Soft feet on the palace floor's of Heaven.
Work til the six, Worked on the seven.
Don't believe half truth's and fabolus lies.
Life ain't always Rainbows and Butterflies.


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IN THE END THE LAS WILL BE FIRST.


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The following comments are for "RAINBOWS AND BUTTERFLIES"
by PAPALAS

Been There...
I can attest to this

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: February 2, 2006 )

THANKS MSTINK
COMING FROM YOU THAT MEANS ALOT.

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: February 8, 2006 )





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