Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
8chapter1

You must login to vote

These walls that confine
serves as my prison cell.
Dark, with musty air and damp floors,
disconnected from truth and lies.
Dreams emerge over reality.
How many hours have passed
I can not tell.

Inhale, exhale, stay alive
deprived of reason or purpose.
"Tick tock, tick tock".
From minute to hour, days, weeks to months put behind.
I still sit where I first began.
Between these barriers that confine,
my prison walls.



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Walls"
by pengster13





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: