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Its so hard to breathe with a sore throat! I growl to myself, but that just makes it worse. God, I hate this, it puts me in such a pissy mood. It's also hard to talk, because I have a really bad infection.


Since I can't talk, I can't ask for help. You think I should go look this up in a book or the internet? Well, my sore throat was part of the package.....I have the flu.


So, since I have the flu, it is such a pain in the ass to do anything while under its evil veil.
I am bedridden. Here I am, all alone in my crappy apartment, bedridden, unable to speak or use the phone to call someone to help me. Do you know how frustrating, this is!? Im in pain, but I can't do shit about it.


Will someone help me?

------
Mad monkey fling poo!


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The following comments are for "Frustration!"
by SingChi

...What?
I was quite taken aback by the brief anger slewn about the page of which has been manifested to create this...

Oddly enough, it was appealing to me, and I quite enjoyed the fifteen seconds of reading you submitted.

Somehow, the length added to the raw and direct appeal of this piece, but perhaps to broaden the idea would be to create something more people could enjoy?

( Posted by: Carnifex [Member] On: January 27, 2006 )

THIS!
you know I really don't care if you enjoyed it or not, but I had something to get off my shoulders when I wrote that. The aggravation of having the sore throat was a metaphore for the frustration of wanting to talk to/see the person you like and you want to talk about them, but can't. Capiche?

( Posted by: SingChi [Member] On: February 13, 2006 )

temper
temper temper darling. you must calm down. Jk. lol. stop looking at me like that. :) See ya

( Posted by: crackpotpoet [Member] On: February 17, 2006 )





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