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Grandmothers -
(who know the secret of life, it's clear)
enjoy rocking in wicker chairs, satiated
and knitting and gabbing with old friends
about yesterday and tomorrow; rock-creak -
click-rock-click-creak, rock-creak; the rhythm
of their dream is undeniably content and their
cheeky glow impossibly brilliant.
We (the young) have much to learn.

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The following comments are for "Cheeky Wicker"
by ak7raPLT

Cheeky Wicker,
The title drew me in. Hooked me good. A very fullfilling story in such few words. Kudo's!

Thanks for sharing this,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: January 21, 2006 )

Cheeky Wicker
Though I found this to be somewhat heavy on the stereotyping, I still liked it. A warm invocative tribute to the power and wisdom found within the crone archetype.

( Posted by: Ashmedai [Member] On: January 22, 2006 )

thanks for...
... writing your reactions. Interesting you bring up the stereotyping. I'm not sure I wrote it about grandmothers, as in, with the capital G. I'm still trying to figure out what I meant, but I most definitely didn't have my own grandma in my mind, then...

-d!

( Posted by: ak7raplt [Member] On: January 23, 2006 )





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