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I scream your name to
save me
silence my fears
my desires
But you watch me from
behind a glass window
waiting for me to heal
from my addiction
so you may take me
whole again.

Or so I want to believe.

Or so I want to believe.

Jan. 18,2006

"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding" Khalil Gibran, The Prophet

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The following comments are for "Or So I Want to Believe"
by Serendipity

Mona, this is a 10
Thanks for sharing this, Lucie beat me to this and she always says such great things.
I could see the 2 loves, seperated, wanting and reaching but held apart by a wall of necessity for sanity's sake. Expectations and fumbling hope. Good write.


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: January 21, 2006 )

Thank you so much for your touching comments. I have not written for a while, and this was all I could feel. I also wanted to hug my knees and scream! Thanks again!!!

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: January 23, 2006 )

weeping portrait
i've already told you how good thid is's really good that you're back to writing again.

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: January 24, 2006 )

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