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You brought me to this height
Brought a smile to my face
Brought candle light
To this dark & lonely place
For years Iíve been waiting
For a light to burn
For a flame so high
To reach this tower

Everything was going right
But then something went wrong
I became locked in a box of emotion
Light was no where to be found

Donít let me fall
From this high ground
Youíve brought me so far
Donít stop now

Donít go away
Keep watch over everything
From night to day
Know that I keep you with me

From the first night
You brought a light
To these dark eyes
A smile to this empty life

Promise me youíll stay
Be here when I need you
Donít leave if you think I donít
I always will no matter what

I remember the day
I remember the laughter
And joy that you gave me
It gave me a piece of heaven

You brought me close
Donít turn away now
I canít let go
I canít forget your smiling face

From the first words out of the dark
You found the candle
A spark in the dark
Canít you see

Donít let me fall
From this high ground
Youíve brought me so far
Donít stop now

I- will be waiting here for you
To wipe those tear away
I- will be watching over you
Even when you donít see me

I ainít gonna cry
I donít wanna scream
I know things ainít just what they seem
But youíll be there for meÖ

------
Chell
Gimme something to believe in... yea yea


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The following comments are for "Don't Let Me Fall"
by LittleCC88

littlecc88
this poem rocks!

( Posted by: ZonerZone [Member] On: January 22, 2006 )





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