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For Misty

Twisty Misty
Small and pretty
The voice of reason
When things get gritty
A floating soul
From home to home
But in our hearts
Shes always known
Through trials and errors
Successes and failures
She gives support
And avoids the snares
Her soul is old
Her mind is wise
As she slips so softly
Through the times

So twisty misty a message for you
depression and sadness cannot consume
Though times may be hard
And things may seem gray
From a gecko to a grasshopper
There will shine brighter days
I know things seem tough
And hard to absorb
But perseverence and strength
Will bring great reward
No I'm not talking money
Or wealth, power or fame
I'm talking about HAPPINESS
In lifes little game





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~~~D.E.N.T.T~~~


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The following comments are for "Never Give Up"
by dentt

I love it
wow this is amazing thanz ronnie i really needed that hope i see you soon Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: January 17, 2006 )

Beautiful...
Dentt,
how lovely of you to show such care and concern for misty, compassion, understanding and simply...Beautiful.
Family is here in his place, that's why I like it here, at times it is as if we're all across the hall from each other.

Misty... KEEP YOUR HEAD UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
LMJ< La'Shea

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: January 17, 2006 )





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