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I picture myself flying
past the city limits
floating off into oblivion
with nothing but clarity ahead
I am Free.

Sitting here with my imagination
running off like a black stallion
thinking about what my hand would look like
painted in wild, exotic colors
I am Dreaming.

The world is so strange
how did we get to this strange point
has evolution gone astray
or is this the way the world is meant to be
I can See.

To learn to question is to learn to think
for we chose our own path
do not follow the imprudent way
for something greater awaits you
I am Learning.

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The following comments are for "Random Thoughts"
by cosmicchaos20

Opens up alot of doors. Good

( Posted by: dentt [Member] On: January 17, 2006 )

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