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I feel my life fall apart around me
I feel my anger devour me
It's all the same as before
I just can't take this shit no more
I hear about the things you do
I see all this good come to you
You took a knife and stabbed me in the back
But all my words are heard as attacks

I just wanna see you pay
For what you've done to me and all of the rest
If i can't live another day
i just wanna see you pay

Everybody says you've changed
You've got the same old tricks, just rearranged
Only i can see the games that you play
Do you realize how you lie everyday?
You pretend to be as close to God as can be
I'm the asshole for saying what all should see
You're the one who sins, why must i do the penance?
You commit the crime, i must face the sentence

I just wanna see you pay
For what you've done to me and all of the rest
If i can't live another day
i just wanna see you pay

You're so full of shit
I just can't deal with it
And everyone believes
I'm the only one who sees
I can't change your ways
Or take back all those days
Why can't i just take it back?

So here i sit writing again
I see the past live in the present
My eyes are so red, my body aches
I see you make the same damn mistakes
I see what has become of you
There is nothing i can do
I put my talent to the test
I can't reach you, but i can tell the rest

I just wanna see you pay
For what you've done to me and all of the rest
If i can't live another day
i just wanna see you pay

Sept. 5, 2002
Shackled to Hollywood World
For Ignorance


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The following comments are for "On the Edge"
by E.G. Evans

Bursting
E.G. Evans,

This is an interesting piece, I like it because you can feel the raw emotion behind it. It made me sad to read this also...the pain from it is very apparent. Hopefully writing this will help you heal...or maybe I am wrong and it is only just some lyrics, either way I like it - nice stuff.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: September 6, 2002 )

raw
I agree with Dras that this piece is bursting with raw energy and emotion. I don't sympathise with the character though, and that's what I like about it.

I can almost imagine the melody in my head as I read the lyrics....loud and angry.

Well done.

apple

( Posted by: appleblossom [Member] On: September 7, 2002 )





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