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Darkness, take my eyes.
Blind my feeling
Bind my thought
Kidnap me, i insist
Tie my hands
Tie my feet,
Lay me down to go to sleep.

Feeling heavy,
Hold me tight
Dont let me go
Not back to light

Show me your shadows
Show me hate
Show me darkness
Is this my fate?

Tell me your secrets
Tell me my place
Tell me where i belong
In this silent space?

Feeling lost
Treat me right
Dont let me go
Not out of your sight

Give me vision
Give me thought
Give me the feeling
I had always sought

Darkness, take my eyes.
Take my hands
Take my feet
Guide me to where
I must meet
My fate
My home
Home sweet home.



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