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The Door To Our Heart

Waiting to exhale
People hibernate
Just like birds, bears,
Deer’s, rabbits, any
Living creature that
Is on the face of this

Every year there is
Someone or something
Going into hibernation
Then migrating, and
Getting adapted to changes
Waiting to exhale***

Clothes don’t make
A person or the way
They brush their hair
It’s the door to their
Heart – the love, and the
Kind of life they are living
Is what makes a person***

When God created the
Rainbow – He was
Inspired by all colors
You and me – waiting
To exhale – Jesus He is
The Door to our heart***

"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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