Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

If I ever caught
a bird
in my mouth
I'd definately
free it.

------
"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Cognition"
by MountainBill

Lucie, Bird excrement?
You're a funny lady. I never thought of the bird doing that while in my mouth, eu! My cognitive powers are limited. (it's def-inite-ly, my mistake) Thanks for your continual encouragement. I'll have to check out some of your poetry.

Doc

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: January 8, 2006 )

Bird food
Followed Lucie here- If you are a cat, there wiukd be much grace. As a human, feathers, I would think, would not be tasty... but I guess it would depend on the bird-
best to you-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: January 8, 2006 )

"Cognition" inspired
If my mouth into
a bird flew
I would spit it out

121006

Doc- Excuse senryupsyched 5/3/5.

Why would you 'catch' a bird in your mouth?

"A fish is caught by its open mouth." -Sicilian
"If you love someone/ Set them free" -Sting

Late,
Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 10, 2006 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: