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A shadow smothers me

As I smell the fumes

From a fire built

In the name of love

I can not breathe

The scent of musk

Stiffles my senses

While I sweat the heat...

Robinbird


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The following comments are for "Stalker"
by Robinbird

some very striking
images. i always enjoy your stuff!

i hope you are enjoying your weekend.

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: January 8, 2006 )

Stalking gone bad
I hope you are the Pheonix!
I give you my eternal flame baby!
best to you always, Robin-
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: January 8, 2006 )

Stalker...
jjd, it pleases me that you enjoy my work, from the mind, body and soul...and, I can't complain,
I'm alive, after being a crash test dummy, hitting a large cattle trailer with no tail lights in the dark at 35-40 mph, solid...I drive a old Cadillac,`88...that car drove off, cracked the bumper and no broke glass...now me, oh my neck! Counting my blessings, oh it hurts.
thank you for dropping in...

Lucie, cool comment...you said much in a few words...I could smell him from the east to the west coast(caveman) or he could smell me...
that ones locked up, too, and they through away the key.

Elizabeth, interesting comment, too...well, I'm
with tattoo's x 2, just so happens, straight up,
got a Pheonix on my left shoulder...and, a butterfly on my R hand and girl, I took flight!...relate this, I had 2 that hated each other and worked together at the same time, that was a trip from Hell...I'm fine, and good to see you, too.

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 8, 2006 )

YOU...
you've been inlove before!! lol
this is brilliantly written,toys with the mind a bit and gives you images to look for inlove and the shadows of life.. an excellent write
Robin, tell me where were you in writing this really? it's just damn good! in short, I like it.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: January 10, 2006 )

LaShea...
Girlfriend, yes, I have loved and loved and loved, again...Now, I'm gun-shy or better, "guy-shy"...I'm pleased you like reading "me", I have been stalked from coast to coast...The biggest
problem was, not being able to judge character. This made way for all kinds of deceivers to "rob" me of limb and near life...I beleived in people, I learned different. This was just my experience, but, I'll tell anyone, "Look and Analize" before you get trapped in a web of deceit...a wrong turn like that, could and will effect the rest of your life...

let me add, all people are not bad, don't quit living...live and have fun doing it!

Enough, you take care, watch you back while moving forward...

Blessings,
Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 15, 2006 )





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