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he who laughs last,
is slow

to be or not to be

hurt
rage
splash

burst

oozing
oozing

goo


none of which are ever
me

he who laughs last,
is slow.

gurgle
laugh
unchained

whim

oozing
oozing

yuu

to be or not to be

all of which are always
me



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"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde


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The following comments are for "He who laughs last, is slow."
by MountainBill

all or nothing, windchime
windchime, You're welcome.

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: January 4, 2006 )





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