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the world's not made of black and white,
not everythings based on truths and lies.
in everything there's shades of gray,
just like there is night and day.

you can't always choose what's right,
don't base your choice on just one side.
look at everything from both views,
only then can your decision be true.

there are no choices black and white,
sometimes there's contradicting sides.
in life there's mane spots of gray,
that change as often as each passing day.

the only thing that you can do,
is follow what you believe is true.
just remember each and every time,
the world's not made of black and white.

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The following comments are for "black and white"
by grrlynn

black and white
I liked it. It makes you think, which is why I read and write poetry, not for the simple rhyming and whatnot, but more so if there's a message.

I think I detect a spelling mistake on line 11
"mane" I think you may mean "many."

( Posted by: Eddieeaves [Member] On: January 10, 2006 )

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