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tired of life and all it's lies,
getting nothing but suffering and strife.
everywhere i look there's problems to face,
i never seem able to get a break.

i seem so selfish when i say,
that nothing ever goes my way.
i can't ever do just what i want,
there's always something that screws it up.

i get sick of dealing with everything,
and all the problem that people bring.
i just want to do what i choose,
not have others tell me what to do.

i know it's selfish of me to complain,
when things don't seem to go my way.
i can't always do what i want,
that's life so i'll just suck it up.


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