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looking back at poems past,
while each progresses their topic holds fast.
so many hold depressing views,
but many more hold thoughts of you.

my poems are my one way out,
my way of expressing what i can't shout.
they keep my thoughts and feelings straight,
show how much i love you and what i hate.

new poems will come and the old will fade,
the meanings may change, or stay the same.
they'll still show my love and my fears,
but change with experiences of many years.


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