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time flows on endlessly,
encircling lives; manipulating.
time changes people;places; and homes,
as weather wears on giant stones.

time marches on heedless of life,
unbeknownst to people and their strife.
time effects everything and everyone,
from the days beginning to the setting sun.

time steadily passes on,
from before birth till after we're gone.
while we may come and we may go,
hopefullt our love will stay and show.


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