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Though I can't include you in
my life because a vow till death do
us part belongs to another, I need
you in a little corner of my heart,
to go to at times quietly, to
tell you I love you.
I know when these words are
whispered , you will hear them,
because I also belong to a little
corner of your heart.

Oscar E. LaPlante

Oscar E. LaPlante

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The following comments are for "the corner of my heart"
by peperethefleabag

Pepere on this corner
And Lucie on that corner. HEY GUYS FILL ME IN! What's 'pepere'? Pepper? I'm sure it's not. But this one's painfully sweet. I loved it for its simplicity, this poem is like that whisper you mentioned here. Nothing grand and loud and boastful, this is only truthful, quiet and unselfish. Thanks for this one. Please stay here and share to us some more.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: January 4, 2006 )

Once again, I find myself reading up on your work. I like; Life's a dance, you learn as you go.

But Just One Smile can wipe away a lot of pain...


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: January 5, 2006 )

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