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Not Meant To Be

I fall in love again
I opened my heart once more
Vulnerable again
To so many pains

All I did was love
What could went wrong?
I gave my all
Shown the bestI know how
But I guess it's never enough

My heart sinks - it's aching
I'm inpain - I'm breaking
Why did I ever feel this way?
When it's never meant to be?

Is she only using me?
Is she only testing me?
I wish I have answers
But maybe not

I'll do my best - to put this ache to rest
I'll smile and say it's OK - at least I will be
I'll have to let go - I'll let her be
I have to be strong
I have to face pain
I have to move on
That's how it's gonna be


If there is response to this personal experience poetry - please do drop me a line



The following comments are for "Not Meant To Be"
by Blueangel

Just Relating
Painful,tragic and sad. Loving is really the best experience and the saddest to say the least. i must say i can relate to what you have written. Loving someone is really the best experience but being hurt in return is the most hurtfull part anyone could experience. You are not alone in this thing called pain of a broken heart. I myself is still in the verge of recovery. Just remember this, to love is being ready to get hurt any time....till the next time

( Posted by: RedAngel [Member] On: August 17, 2006 )

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