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In a world where a freak accident, caused by the evil organization D.A.R.K. has brought a number of dimensions closely together making travel between them easier but more deadlier. the travel between these "Dimensional Zones" is made safe by demensional gates that are regulated by a biotag system. A computer chip under the skin issued by the central government that allows people, who can afford them to pass thru the gates. The chips are expensive, so only the rich can buy them or given to government employees. anyone that passes thru the gate without a chip is arrested and severely punished. The zones are diversely different, from sprawling city streets to dense forests, to residential areas. even if you have a chip there are some zones you can't go into. This story is about two people, who by law and their upbringing can't be together. will they get together? even i don't know? and i am the narrator. watching as the story unfolds just like the rest of you.I have no idea what is going on in the writer's head. the only thing i do know is that the story will be from the P.O.V. of our young romeoesque, slum rat as some people are no doubt going to call him. i'll pop in from time to time to explain or just give a much needed break in the story for whatever reason. now onward to the story!

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