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by fairgrace (Member) - published: January 2, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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Silent eyes
Dumb tears
Hearts stifle
Lips seal
Manacled minds

But with hope so sheer
For light to come
And reach over here

December 16th 05


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Sometimes we must be hurt in order to grow..
Sometimes we must fail in order to know..
Sometimes we must lose in order to gain..
Because some lessons in life are best learned through PAIN..!!
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The following comments are for "Patients"
by fairgrace

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Encompasses reaction to medical problem, legal dilemma, emotional turmoil, spiritual "fog", intellectual deficit, what am I missing among the many possibilities?

This is quite a feat, Hiba. To have so few words be so appropriate for so much...

Thank you for posting this.

Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: January 7, 2006 )





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