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The Rain Brews



The rain beats
Against my pane,
Ceiling, cars, and
It bounces on the
Trees, and the limbs
Bough gracefully
Rain is just --
Like coffee, the
Rain brews, and
Brews until it stops!
After the passing rain
I can smell the aroma
of the green grass...

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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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The following comments are for "The Rain Brews"
by JEANNIE45

Rain...
Very nice Jeannie, I love rain and this is a good use of words to stimulate the senses, enjoyed much...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 6, 2006 )

Perfect comparison
I love everything about this. It is short but says it all. I love the rain and how soothing it is (without thunder). I love to walk in the rain with a little Bailey's in coffee... walking under the branches of the trees to see that life doesn't stop when it rains but comes out to play. I think it washes away all of the stess in my life. Funny thing is I can never find anyone to go with me.... I thought no one got it but you seem to! Thank you so much for this one.

( Posted by: DonnaJ [Member] On: January 6, 2006 )

Varigated song...
I can smell each drop... I can hear the jingling sound... I can see it vignette while having a hot cup of coffee.... But I cannot help praising this piece..

Regards,

Myth.

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: February 3, 2006 )

Rain
Lucie, Robin, DonnaJ, Myth...
Thanks to you all for your kind and warm words...

Lucie; Snow, oh yes! I love snowy days here in Greenville, South Carolina whenever it snows.

Robin; Yes it does stimulate the senses indeed.

DonnaJ; You are absolutely right! Rain sometimes can release stress, or whatever is joggling the mind. I walk in the rain sometimes to just clear my mind. and the breeze, freshness is like calgon, it "takes me away" and adding a good cup of coffee with it. Thanks for understanding and going with me there.

Myth; Thanks for the comment, your email is what got me here. The Lord awaken me so early in the morning. It is 4:24am; Some of my work I have not commented on because I am so busy sometimes. Now, isn't that something, the juggling sound, and great smell of them both.



Blessings to all,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 3, 2006 )





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