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The Brook


Over in the brook
Beautiful stones set
To the shimmering
And sparkling water
When the stormy ---
Winds come it floods
The brook and into
The streets at night

But when a strong
Storm comes, it
Brings down trees
Rooting them up,
Lines, and debris
Every where and by
Godís grace His sun
Grows another tree
In itís place

The brook - the water
Returns to its final
Flow


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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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