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bewitched
bedeviled
befuckedup
guiled and lured
into passions dream
I be wolf
I finally was able to get out
of the sack with some semblance
around four
stand up straight,
then down on all fours

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"All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling" -Oscar Wilde


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The following comments are for "To Be or Not To Be"
by MountainBill

to be or not to be
I sense the spirit of Macbeth in ur poem!!!

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: December 31, 2005 )

to be or not to be
tap5000, fairgrace, thanks to you both for the generous words of encouragement.

( Posted by: MountainBill [Member] On: January 3, 2006 )

To Be!
I have to say I really enjoyed this. Nice, short, tight and exciting. Great read.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 23, 2006 )

thanks nae
please to know you found it exciting. sorry I took so long to thank but been ill and medicated. back to myself soon I hope.

( Posted by: mountainbill [Member] On: February 26, 2006 )





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