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What's real, And what's not? Who's here, And who's not? I can see, What you don't dream. I can see, What you don't imagine. A burst of light, And nights dark shadow; I can see, What's in between. A times it's good, And sometimes it's not. I can see, What you can see. We dream among the few, who know, What is real, And what is not. I can see, Can you?



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The following comments are for "In Between"
by Jacey

inbetween
just wanted to say - i'm in the semi finals of a competition with this poem, plus it's gonna be published! how cool is that!??!?!
jacey

( Posted by: jacey [Member] On: November 5, 2002 )

Poetry.com
Awwwww man, Poetry.Com's a ripoff? Damn! Eh well, at least I never sent them any money - I'm not that stupid ;)
J

( Posted by: Jacey [Member] On: January 20, 2003 )





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