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Undecided where to go
Looking out of this window
Unwilling to stay
Scared to go

Leaving everything I've known
For these fifteen years
Questions flying in my head
The greatest fear of all

Been gone from this small town
Only a couple weeks
Seems like forever, in my mental state
Too many thoughts
When I'm around here


The following comments are for "Questions"
by Rys

I'll change those two things, you're right, it sounds better without them:)

I've lived in a small town in Central WA state for my entire life, now I'm going to Seattle for's only about 2 hours away, but still a big difference.


( Posted by: Rys [Member] On: August 30, 2002 )

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